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“Mary! Mary Brandon, you get back in this house at once!” Mother’s voice was distant, but the fact that I could still hear her was annoying.

It’s Alice! I nearly shouted back, but instead I focused my energy on running. I pushed my legs harder, my mind focused solely on my destination: the weeping willow. I could think about Mother later.

There--the willow! I sighed, stretching my hands out to the rough bark: it was comforting to my skin. I leaned against the tree, catching my breath and breathing in its familiar smell. I’d always come here when there had been trouble at home.

Without even thinking about it, I was halfway up the tree; my hands and feet knew exactly where to go. Within seconds I was on the highest branch, looking over everything.

I sighed again in relief. No one would find me here. I was safe.

It had been just one plate this time, one plate! So my fingers had slipped, big deal. If Cynthia had dropped it, Mother wouldn’t have batted an eyelash. I scowled at the though. Just because I could see things before they happened, did that make me so different? So inhuman? Because, certainly, all humans needed affection to live. But did my ability make it seem that I didn’t need any affection at all?

Maybe it was just because I was so different, so strange. Mother hated different. But was I so different? Just because I saw things and wanted to explore more than I wanted to start a family--did that make me so odd? An outcast?

Not that being an outcast was so bad--friends tied a person down so that they couldn’t leave, couldn’t move. Couldn’t explore. Which was exactly what I wanted to do.

I wanted to fly.

The Wright Brothers. The Red Baron. I wanted to fly. I wanted to set records. I wanted to see new lands. I wanted to live my life.

Why couldn’t they understand that? Why did I have to want a family? Certainly not all girls wanted a family! Was I so different?

I groaned in frustration, slamming myself back against the tree. My thoughts were going in circles; It did no good to think about my family here, anyway. This was a sacred area.

This was where I’d first seen the man. Well, soldier, really.

Honey-blonde hair, a tall stature, a broad chest, and strange, sad red eyes. I knew I should be terrified of those eyes, but there was something so desperate in them that I couldn’t help but feel a strange sympathy towards him….

My eyes closed as I daydreamed, but they shot open as I realized that the sun was setting. I cursed and rushed back down the willow, praying that I would be forgiven for the stupid plate. The incident seemed years old by the time I reached the house.
©2008-2009 ~Gonewiththevampire
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Just a side note: deviantART makes me hate italics. >.<

YAY ALICE'S BACKSTORY WOO! XD So I totally lied in my meme when I said my next fic would be inspired by "Yes" by Coldplay--I promise you that I WILL write it, it's just that it's really hard. But I'll get it done. =D

OKAY. SO. Haha I came up with the idea for this at exactly 2:23 am on November 30th. XD I've taken a habbit of writing down the time and date of when things pop into my head. I like it. Haha it was so funny because I wrote out the summary for it (and I NEVER do summaries; it was a first) and my only real comment on it was that I was freaking out that I could remember Alice's sister's name at 2:30 IN THE MORNING. My mind was blown. XD

Okay, about this fic. Well. I love Alice's character--she is basically every writer's dream. I can basically improvise whatever I want, because, I mean, Alice doesn't remember her human life at all, right? So how do we know that Alice didn't like the idea of flying. I thought that seemed like a very Alice-y thing to be into. =] Oh, and the anti-family thing---that came from this anti-Breaking Dawn thing I read on an anti-Twilight site. The author complained that like ALL the Twilight girls wanted families, and how that isn't how it is in the real world. There are women who don't want kids. (Which, for me, is hard to imagine, because I want to have a big family, but again, this is just me.) And I figured, why would Alice want a family? What if she didn't? There's nothing that said that she did, so why make her want one?

Does any of that make sense? XD

But yeah, that's it, really. I'll post Chapter Two tomorrow. =]

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:iconblueeyes13697:
There's a chapter two, right? If so, I'm going to go read it now. :)
:icont0rri3:
I really liked this! Very well written!
I'm a Jasper Hale fanatic, so naturally I find this intriguing. Oh, and when I say "Jasper Hale" I mean Alice because, well, she's the only reason for him to keep up with the Cullens...
Haha great job.
:icongonewiththevampire:
=D I'm glad! Thank you! =] I hope you enjoy the rest. =3

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:iconlauren-angel-cullen:
ur rite ... alice didnt want kids cuz she didnt remember her human life so she didnt get a maternal side! so those anti-twilight ppl need 2 learn a thing or 2! ... in case u havnt gesd i LUV alice!

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Awe some fan fic
can you read my book and tell me what you think
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:icontwilighter591:
this is lovely! detailed but still understandable. its a gr8 thing to read
:icongonewiththevampire:
:D Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

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:icontwilighter591:
wen will chapter 2 be up? or is it up already?
(muttering to self) -plz say it is plz say it is plz say it is-
:icongonewiththevampire:
It's been up for a while. Her whole backstory is complete. [link]

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